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Post by Morgan on May 31, 2009 20:44:48 GMT -6
Hello all. I've updated my NMS series and so far have the prologue out. Prologue"Life was so simple then. We were all so innocent. It will stay with us forever, A nightmare to remember" - A Nightmare to Remember, Dream Theater. Chapter 2“Don’t take him wrong, let him be. Sometimes he feels like he ought to be alone, alone. He doesn’t mean to be mean. He just needs to leave" – Sad for Me, by No Doubt. Chapter 2 progress:10% Writing. 100% Characters. 0% Set.
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Post by Scarlett on May 31, 2009 21:57:21 GMT -6
It sounds good! I'm going to make sure to read it tomorrow. I have to get to bed!
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Post by Morgan on May 31, 2009 23:44:38 GMT -6
Lol, okay Scarlett. Thanks for that It's 3PM for Aussies.
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Post by Larinda on Jun 1, 2009 14:18:36 GMT -6
I liked it. It's not your average love story, it's got a good twist to it. The beginning of Chapter One started out a bit slow, but once she got to the woods it really picked up. Will we be seeing any flashbacks of Kellan - his past or how he met Colette? Or will it be strictly from her point of view?
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Post by Morgan on Nov 5, 2009 22:17:56 GMT -6
Just want to say I've re-written it and the prologue so far is up.
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Post by craftyy :) on Nov 6, 2009 12:48:48 GMT -6
Hehe, cool!!! I like the first version, I think it's really deep Hope you're having fun with it
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Post by Morgan on Nov 6, 2009 17:29:19 GMT -6
The first version? Do you mean the version before?
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Post by craftyy :) on Nov 7, 2009 11:28:42 GMT -6
Yeah... ? Confused... dot com xD I like it anywas
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Post by Morgan on Nov 7, 2009 15:48:43 GMT -6
Lol. I had a different version before but it was kind of bad.
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Post by Morgan on Nov 27, 2009 17:42:13 GMT -6
Sorry for double post! Chapter 1 is out for those who want to read it.
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