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Post by satindreamz on Jun 19, 2009 20:19:36 GMT -6
I started this story a year or so ago but could not come up with a title for it. Thus far there are only two chapters. I am not sure how to continue on with it so after anyone reads whats done so far, ideas would be greatly appreciated. I feel bad that its unfinished but writers block can be a pain in the ass lol. The site is called JadelynsStories because back then when I was in a rp chat program that was a name I had used so I went with it. Eventually when I have the time I'll put it on another site that is better suited to my work. Anyway, enough rambling by me. www.freewebs.com/jadelynsstories/
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Post by Morgan on Jun 19, 2009 21:06:03 GMT -6
Wow wow wow wow! That was very cool satin! I liked it a lot. Though sometimes the " would have a space in front of it, e.g.: Hello there." What are you doing?" And I think maybe you should go back and fix it up. Karmaa
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Post by satindreamz on Jun 19, 2009 21:16:44 GMT -6
I appreciate the advice. When I wrote it I just sat down and wrote what came to me. Its been so long since I've really given it a good read over so any pointers and advice are greatly welcomed. I still honestly dont have a clue where to go with it. I hate leaving it hanging like it does but hopefully soon I'll beable to write the 3rd chapter. I'm anxious myself to see where it leads lol. some time this weekend when I get the chance and am not tired, I'll go back into it and start by fixing up those.
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