danahhh.
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Post by danahhh. on Jun 16, 2009 17:55:05 GMT -6
"We are ordinary people like you. We have families, jobs, hopes, and dreams. We are not a cult. We are real. We laugh, we cry. We are serious. We have a sense of humor. You don't have to be afraid of us. We don't want to convert you. And please don't try to convert us. Just give us the same right we give you--to live in peace. We are much more similar to you than you think."
My mouth hung open. The breathing on the back of my neck stung. My eyes stung. My body felt absolutely numb. I could barley breathe. All that we had....it was over. Vanished. "Do you believe me?" He asked. Tears began to run down my face. I bit my lip. The realization struck me harder and harder. He wasn't like that. He can't be. He shouldn't be. "I didn't kill those people," he continued. "I'm not like them." I whirled around to face him. "Then what are you then? The way lightning strikes everytime you get mad. The way those screams are coming everytime you're not with me. The way you choose to be with me and not Raine. The axe you had in your hand that night. You never explained that to me. Here's you chance. Just-" I swallowed. "Just tell me what you are." I felt fear tighten in my throat and chest as his mouth grew into a smile. Not just a smile, either. He didn't look anything like himself. He wasn't the same person I knew. His head was bent. I was afraid he'd start howling. His eyes changed to a deep, dark, endless black hole. Before I could escape, he grabbed my arm. "I'm exactly who I am." He pulled me closer. His grip wasn't harsh, but strong. His eyes weren't cold, but black. His smile wasn't evil, but nothing what I've seen before. His breath against my ear wasn't cold, but naturally warm. "I'm not a monster. I'm not the devil. I'm not God's gift. I'm not a magician. I'm not ancient. I haven't been around forever. I've never met Satan. Who...exactly...am I?"
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danahhh.
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Post by danahhh. on Jun 16, 2009 17:55:56 GMT -6
CharactersMargo Delatorre 18 years of age. Azrael [az-rail] 19 years of age. Raine 19 years of age. Abner 19 years of age. More coming soon.... [/font][/center]
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danahhh.
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Post by danahhh. on Jun 16, 2009 17:56:15 GMT -6
reserved. x]
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Post by Scarlett on Jun 16, 2009 18:00:03 GMT -6
Whoa. Can't wait for more.
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Post by Morgan on Jun 16, 2009 23:57:58 GMT -6
Wowee! That is SPECTACTULAR!
Your making me want to read more! PLEASE HURRY UP! *eyes are wild and I drool*
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Post by {firefly} on Jun 17, 2009 8:25:45 GMT -6
This sounds amazing Dana Can't wait for more; I'll be watching this space! Your intro was very gripping, you write so well.
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danahhh.
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Post by danahhh. on Jun 18, 2009 20:59:16 GMT -6
-blushes-
Awwwwh.
You people are cool. XD
The summary is updatedddd.
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Post by Scarlett on Jun 18, 2009 21:51:14 GMT -6
This story is awesome. Can't wait to read more. Karmaaa!
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