Post by PlyPlay665 on Jun 1, 2009 1:28:04 GMT -6
I was writing this story for a contest, and James thought it was good, so I'm going to put it here!
What do you think?
I got up and tip-toed out of the house, as everyone in my family was still asleep, and I didn’t want to wake anyone up. Out back, there was a HUGE field where I love to run through, but my mom and dad said that they didn’t want me in there, because we didn’t own the land. You know kids, and how they never listen to their parents, so I ventured far into the field, farther than I had ever been. After walking for what felt like an hour, I saw a peculiar path that lead into the woods that seemed to surround the field for miles.
Me, being curious walked down the path, into the forest. I walked a while, getting even farther and farther into the woods. After while, I knew I had gotten too far into the woods, as I could not figure the way back out. I spent hours looking for the way out, and it started getting darker. I soon found myself in despair to find my way out, until I found an old, and abandoned looking house. Knowing that it was probably the best thing to do, I walked in.
Inside was a hallway leading upstairs, and into a darker hallway to the left. I chose to walk down the dark hallway, because I didn’t know just how safe it was. I walked down the hallway. At the end of the hallway there was two doors, and a clock, just tick-tocking away. I tried the door to the left, it wouldn’t budge, it seemed to be locked. So I went to the door to the right, I walked into what seemed to be a kitchen, but what’s that? Blood leaking from a micro-wave, and a blood smear that leads to a door on the left. I tip-toed to the micro-wave, to only see a severed head! There was something wrote on his fore-head, some kind of "A" looking thing. I then walk into the door, to see what other horrors I would find, the smear goes al the way to a chair, and stops. It seems that the body is gone. I realize what I just got myself into, and ran back to the front door.
As I got to the foriour, I start to hear voices, was it just my imagination? I couldn’t think now, I needed to get out of here! I ran to the door, and desperately tried to open it, but to my despair it was locked. I then think to myself that something was not right, and I needed to fix it. I then walk up the creaky stairs, with the hope that I could figure my way out of this place. Up the stairs was a hallway that spilt into two hallways, following the same law, I went right. I hear noises coming from a ceiling, and then I see a door leading into the attic. Up in the attic I see a dead body chained to the wall. I started studying the room, and see a piece of glass writing "3489". I figured this was important, and tried remembered it. I then see a piece of wood lying on the floor, it has a symbol that looks like an "F". Is this some kind of secret code? I didn’t know, but I walked back down from the attic, and see a door that leads to a bedroom. There was a puddle of blood on the bed, and it looks like it even spayed onto the ceiling. Then all of the sudden I hear something coming from the gramophone, it is playing all by itself, but it is unplugged. How is that possible? Then I see a roof light swaying, but there seems to be no wind in the room. Another thing I noticed is a picture, above the bed, it looks like it would be covering something.
I walked over, and took the painting down, only to see a safe. I close into the safe, and try a few possible combinations, until I remember the numbers on the glass, and enter 3489. As soon as I enter that, it opens. To only startle me with a book, a letter that looked also like a F, and a real human heart. I opened the book and read about all these things like creatures of the underworld, and all kinds of stuff like that. After reading the book, I close everything back up, and walk into the bath off the bedroom. To only see a bathtub, and sink full of blood. I also see that someone boarded up the bathroom window. I look into the sink, because I seen something was clogging the sink. I talk myself into sticking my hand into the sink, to find a key. I then see that there is nothing more to see in the room, and walk back into the hallway.
I see another door on the other side of the hallway. There seems to be smoke coming from the bottom of the door, I then see that the door has no handle, and wouldn’t open without one. So I turn around to see what else I could find downstairs. I walked back into the dark hallway, and as I walk down it, I see something that looked like the pictures from that book. Was all this actually real? I then figure there is something that I’m missing, and look into a picture down the hall, it seemed to be moving. I see an upside down star, with a bunch of symbols at the edges. I study it. Maybe I will need it later, then boom, it changes into a different picture. Was that my imagination again? Am I going crazy? I open a door that seems to go underground that was next to the picture, there is another door, I turn the handle, but it won’t open, it is as if someone is behind the door holding it closed. All of the sudden I hear a noise saying “You must Remember.” What could THAT possibly mean? I’ve never been here In my life! I walk up the stairs, to go back to the two doors., maybe my key fits into the one on the left? It opens, into a library. There is a bust of someone, and did the eyes just move? I shook my head, and continued in my business. I see a severed arm, although it no longer surprised me, there seems to be a dead body at every corner. I then see a symbol on the desk the arm is lying on, it looks kind of like a U, crossed out.
I then look through the bookcase, and see a lot of books, one of the books looks like a hand-written paper-back book. Written “Xavier Rehayem c. 1878” In the book it talks about a dad, and a daughter, Gwen Rayhem, moving into a house in the woods after a divorce. Shortly after, his daughter is possessed by a demon, and he has to kill her. The demon then gets angry, and makes his life a living hell. He soon loses all hope, and becomes deeply depressed. I then look through more books, and find a bunch of letters listed, ABCDEFGHIJ. I didn’t understand what really that meant, but something was telling me that is was important, I then look into the mirror, to find that it had the word “remember” smeared on it. WHAT DOES THAT MEAN? I walked back into the kitchen, and look through the cupboards, of the stuff I found was a small knife with blood on it. Although I had a feeling it wouldn’t faze the thing I was against. I walked into the room off the kitchen, and see a book lying on the table, why didn’t I notice it before, was I in such of a hurry to get out of here, that I missed it? I then picked up the book, and read about a guy who finds the place in 1992 and is forced to stay there, and do unspeakable things!
I walk out of the room, and try to open that darn door upstairs, apparently it was the Xavier’s daughter’s room. I walk up the stairs, and hear a girl crying behind the door, it is now slightly opened. I walk up and push the door open. I see what looks like Gwen Rayhem standing on the side of the room, I try to talk to her, but all of the sudden the demon took over her, and screamed at me! The noise was so loud, it knocked me out for a while, but all of the sudden, the same voice I keep on hearing says “Wake Up”. I look around in the room, and see that there is a blood stain on the bed, where Xavier killed Gwen. How was it still moist, it had been over 100 years?!? Not understanding what I just saw, I walked down stairs, maybe I have “remembered.”
I walk down, and inside I find a furnace, and an axe lying next to it. I take the axe, and break down the wall to the left. Inside there is a HUGE tunnel. I walk for a long time, until I reach a HUGE room. There I see the guy that has been talking to me for a while. He then asks me to fill out this upside down Star , with the symbols he has been giving me. I couldn’t remember what order they were supposed to go, and spent what felt like hours trying to do it. I then decide to take a run for it into a hallway. I ran up and down a bunch of stairs, and it ended into a pathway in the woods. I t was now morning, and there was still some frost of the plants. I could hear him coming, and I tried to run away, but he caught up with me, as he was very fast and strong. I struggled with him for a while. His strength was to great for me, and he stuck a knife into me.
Now it is your turn, oh great one, will you fail like us three, or will you succeed in being his apprentice?
CREDITS:
Ben Leffer – for making the game I used to go off by, called “Exmortis”
Me, being curious walked down the path, into the forest. I walked a while, getting even farther and farther into the woods. After while, I knew I had gotten too far into the woods, as I could not figure the way back out. I spent hours looking for the way out, and it started getting darker. I soon found myself in despair to find my way out, until I found an old, and abandoned looking house. Knowing that it was probably the best thing to do, I walked in.
Inside was a hallway leading upstairs, and into a darker hallway to the left. I chose to walk down the dark hallway, because I didn’t know just how safe it was. I walked down the hallway. At the end of the hallway there was two doors, and a clock, just tick-tocking away. I tried the door to the left, it wouldn’t budge, it seemed to be locked. So I went to the door to the right, I walked into what seemed to be a kitchen, but what’s that? Blood leaking from a micro-wave, and a blood smear that leads to a door on the left. I tip-toed to the micro-wave, to only see a severed head! There was something wrote on his fore-head, some kind of "A" looking thing. I then walk into the door, to see what other horrors I would find, the smear goes al the way to a chair, and stops. It seems that the body is gone. I realize what I just got myself into, and ran back to the front door.
As I got to the foriour, I start to hear voices, was it just my imagination? I couldn’t think now, I needed to get out of here! I ran to the door, and desperately tried to open it, but to my despair it was locked. I then think to myself that something was not right, and I needed to fix it. I then walk up the creaky stairs, with the hope that I could figure my way out of this place. Up the stairs was a hallway that spilt into two hallways, following the same law, I went right. I hear noises coming from a ceiling, and then I see a door leading into the attic. Up in the attic I see a dead body chained to the wall. I started studying the room, and see a piece of glass writing "3489". I figured this was important, and tried remembered it. I then see a piece of wood lying on the floor, it has a symbol that looks like an "F". Is this some kind of secret code? I didn’t know, but I walked back down from the attic, and see a door that leads to a bedroom. There was a puddle of blood on the bed, and it looks like it even spayed onto the ceiling. Then all of the sudden I hear something coming from the gramophone, it is playing all by itself, but it is unplugged. How is that possible? Then I see a roof light swaying, but there seems to be no wind in the room. Another thing I noticed is a picture, above the bed, it looks like it would be covering something.
I walked over, and took the painting down, only to see a safe. I close into the safe, and try a few possible combinations, until I remember the numbers on the glass, and enter 3489. As soon as I enter that, it opens. To only startle me with a book, a letter that looked also like a F, and a real human heart. I opened the book and read about all these things like creatures of the underworld, and all kinds of stuff like that. After reading the book, I close everything back up, and walk into the bath off the bedroom. To only see a bathtub, and sink full of blood. I also see that someone boarded up the bathroom window. I look into the sink, because I seen something was clogging the sink. I talk myself into sticking my hand into the sink, to find a key. I then see that there is nothing more to see in the room, and walk back into the hallway.
I see another door on the other side of the hallway. There seems to be smoke coming from the bottom of the door, I then see that the door has no handle, and wouldn’t open without one. So I turn around to see what else I could find downstairs. I walked back into the dark hallway, and as I walk down it, I see something that looked like the pictures from that book. Was all this actually real? I then figure there is something that I’m missing, and look into a picture down the hall, it seemed to be moving. I see an upside down star, with a bunch of symbols at the edges. I study it. Maybe I will need it later, then boom, it changes into a different picture. Was that my imagination again? Am I going crazy? I open a door that seems to go underground that was next to the picture, there is another door, I turn the handle, but it won’t open, it is as if someone is behind the door holding it closed. All of the sudden I hear a noise saying “You must Remember.” What could THAT possibly mean? I’ve never been here In my life! I walk up the stairs, to go back to the two doors., maybe my key fits into the one on the left? It opens, into a library. There is a bust of someone, and did the eyes just move? I shook my head, and continued in my business. I see a severed arm, although it no longer surprised me, there seems to be a dead body at every corner. I then see a symbol on the desk the arm is lying on, it looks kind of like a U, crossed out.
I then look through the bookcase, and see a lot of books, one of the books looks like a hand-written paper-back book. Written “Xavier Rehayem c. 1878” In the book it talks about a dad, and a daughter, Gwen Rayhem, moving into a house in the woods after a divorce. Shortly after, his daughter is possessed by a demon, and he has to kill her. The demon then gets angry, and makes his life a living hell. He soon loses all hope, and becomes deeply depressed. I then look through more books, and find a bunch of letters listed, ABCDEFGHIJ. I didn’t understand what really that meant, but something was telling me that is was important, I then look into the mirror, to find that it had the word “remember” smeared on it. WHAT DOES THAT MEAN? I walked back into the kitchen, and look through the cupboards, of the stuff I found was a small knife with blood on it. Although I had a feeling it wouldn’t faze the thing I was against. I walked into the room off the kitchen, and see a book lying on the table, why didn’t I notice it before, was I in such of a hurry to get out of here, that I missed it? I then picked up the book, and read about a guy who finds the place in 1992 and is forced to stay there, and do unspeakable things!
I walk out of the room, and try to open that darn door upstairs, apparently it was the Xavier’s daughter’s room. I walk up the stairs, and hear a girl crying behind the door, it is now slightly opened. I walk up and push the door open. I see what looks like Gwen Rayhem standing on the side of the room, I try to talk to her, but all of the sudden the demon took over her, and screamed at me! The noise was so loud, it knocked me out for a while, but all of the sudden, the same voice I keep on hearing says “Wake Up”. I look around in the room, and see that there is a blood stain on the bed, where Xavier killed Gwen. How was it still moist, it had been over 100 years?!? Not understanding what I just saw, I walked down stairs, maybe I have “remembered.”
I walk down, and inside I find a furnace, and an axe lying next to it. I take the axe, and break down the wall to the left. Inside there is a HUGE tunnel. I walk for a long time, until I reach a HUGE room. There I see the guy that has been talking to me for a while. He then asks me to fill out this upside down Star , with the symbols he has been giving me. I couldn’t remember what order they were supposed to go, and spent what felt like hours trying to do it. I then decide to take a run for it into a hallway. I ran up and down a bunch of stairs, and it ended into a pathway in the woods. I t was now morning, and there was still some frost of the plants. I could hear him coming, and I tried to run away, but he caught up with me, as he was very fast and strong. I struggled with him for a while. His strength was to great for me, and he stuck a knife into me.
Now it is your turn, oh great one, will you fail like us three, or will you succeed in being his apprentice?
CREDITS:
Ben Leffer – for making the game I used to go off by, called “Exmortis”
What do you think?